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I caught your eye in the hall,
I couldn't take it, I looked to the wall.
My heart just might burst, this love is too much.
I wait for you btween classes and lunch.
Just the thought of you sends me high,
Sometimes just a touch and I can fly.
Maybe one day you will see,
Just how happy we could be.
I imagine my hand in yours,
And I would be all you adore.
So please hurry up and see I'm what you long.
I'll answer fast, it won't take me long.
But don't worry I'll be there, just look and see
I'll be by your side from A to C.
If you take too long,
Or some one else comes along,
You will have to miss out,
Theres only so long I'll hang about.
So take your time,
Though I still wish you were mine.
Just remember me in the wings,
And all I told you, all these things.
You may never read this but I'll be fine
My feelings will be locked up until next time.
I won't write of you again, I won't let it out,
Until my love for you burns so hot I need to shout.
So here I dedicate this to you,
Now what will you do?
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Author's Comments

:( Depression is very bleak and black. Where's my freakin' Zoloft? Its a good thing none of you guys go to Nease, you might know him. Not theat it matters I never named him. O I know lets name him Big K. If you go to Nease and are in ROTC then you will know who it is. Not that you know who I am so that information would be pointless to you. Am I rambling? I hate it when people ramble and rant in their artist's comments. It just makes me want to say SHUT UP. Its kinda hard for me to read know there are comments. Ahhhh Im doing it again, Imgoing to shut up but go read my opother works. :D

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:iconkiko-chan13:
aww i liked it

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~Evalyne
:iconelvin-vampress:
Thank you very much! :)

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Do know the muffin man? Yes? Well I ate him aannnddd the gingerbread man! What now. I shall rule the world! yes you shall all be my slaves. Now have a nice day and thanks for istening.
:iconkiko-chan13:
no problem

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~Evalyne
:iconkaimei-hinoke:
ooh you know, i know you. and i was going to go to Nease. and i ramble a lot in my artist's comments. haha, whaddaya know! lol.

anyways, sounds great! cept for the depression part o course. it'll get better for yah! =D

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With all our joys and fears
Wrapped in forgotten years
The past is laughing as today just slips away
Can't Repeat, The Offspring
:iconelvin-vampress:
I have found I suck at writing happy poems. If I get married I bet the dude will be a puke worthy optimist. The oppisite of me.

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Do know the muffin man? Yes? Well I ate him aannnddd the gingerbread man! What now. I shall rule the world! yes you shall all be my slaves. Now have a nice day and thanks for istening.
:iconkaimei-hinoke:
haha, yeah. i can definitely picture that. you'll get someone great i bet! =D

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With all our joys and fears
Wrapped in forgotten years
The past is laughing as today just slips away
Can't Repeat, The Offspring
:iconelvin-vampress:
One day hopefully not too soon. I dont wanna marry out of high school, they almost never work. And knowing me I would not be in tha small chance, but it'll happen, maybe, one day.

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Do know the muffin man? Yes? Well I ate him aannnddd the gingerbread man! What now. I shall rule the world! yes you shall all be my slaves. Now have a nice day and thanks for istening.

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